Thursday, July 27, 2006


Immaculately dressed
Trying to impress.
You pass by my window

I watch you from a distance
My heart skips a beat
I wish you would come closer
You are sometimes within my reach

I stretch out my hand
want to touch
Just when I think I have you
You slip by
I am left alone
Waiting and hoping.

87 comments:

priya 8:25 AM  

That was a great one.

archana 8:50 AM  

A good one StarryN,charming !

Manic Street Preacher 8:55 AM  

preacher sees starry nights tryin to reach out to someone.
the other you?

peace..!!
\m/

starry nights 8:56 AM  

Thank you Priya.

shilpi 9:09 AM  

hi

liked visiting your blog.

samuru999 9:17 AM  

Oh... I love this!
Beautiful!

Margie :)

Sumitha 9:38 AM  

Oh that was lovely!

SCRIBBLEZ TO WAKEUP 9:48 AM  

This is a smart one aparts from having the tones of "want"...Really wonder if you are waiting to touch a butterfly or a person you have a crush on...its leading u know..:)

Neers 9:55 AM  

and the hope lives on!! :)

starry nights 10:32 AM  

Archana..thanks.

starry nights 10:33 AM  

Only a butterfly preacher.

starry nights 10:33 AM  

Shilpi..thanks and do come back again.

starry nights 10:34 AM  

Samuru..thanks.

starry nights 10:34 AM  

Shankari..thanks.

starry nights 10:34 AM  

Sumitha..thanks.

starry nights 10:35 AM  

Scribblez...Just a beautiful butterfly passing by my window.

starry nights 10:36 AM  

Neers..we are nothing without hope.

southpaw 10:38 AM  

Butterflies r always tempting...

Neers 10:41 AM  

THANKS SO MUCH, Lalitha!! :)

Eclipsed Thoughts 10:58 AM  

* I am left alone,
Waiting and Hoping...

Last line sounded tragic and i am glad that you left a optimistic note on that... (Hoping)...

Take care dear!

Sudarshan 11:11 AM  

Beautiful words, and beautiful pictures:-)
I'm impressed!!

Contented 11:34 AM  

Hey starry! How are you?

very nice one!!

Isnt it that (hoping and waiting) what makes life exciting...:)

Natasha 12:04 PM  

I liked it. I felt it had that soul searching 'Emily Dickinson' appeal to it. Lovely! :)

Maya Cassis 12:14 PM  

hope the hope keeps hoping and the wait just gets over with soon :)
nice one

Sarah 12:15 PM  

We all wait.. don't we?

karmic_jay 12:24 PM  

Who be the one you are trying to reach out to? :)

starry nights 1:00 PM  

Southpaw..true.butterflies come by,they tease you and flyaway.

starry nights 1:00 PM  

Eclipsed thoughts..thank you.Where there is hope, there is life.

starry nights 1:01 PM  

Sudharshan..thank you.very kind of you.

starry nights 1:02 PM  

Contented..true.I would rather hope and wait than give up. thanks.

starry nights 1:03 PM  

Natasha..thank you. sometimes I wish I was a butterfly just flying around, stopping to smell the flowers.

starry nights 1:03 PM  

Maya..I hope so too.thank you

starry nights 1:04 PM  

Sarah..so true we all wait.

starry nights 1:04 PM  

Karmic Jay..maybe someone close to me but really far away.

smz 1:53 PM  

that was sooo cute

itz like kiss the frog and may be he will become a prince :P

Anonymous,  2:19 PM  

smz..thank you.

Id it is 2:51 PM  

Makes me think of puppy love. The longing and the ineptness to access are so poignantly expressed.

KK 3:43 PM  

Nie one Starry Nights...reminded me of my crush in college :)

starry nights 4:36 PM  

Id it is..thank you

starry nights 4:36 PM  

KK..thank you.sweet memories for you.

Vj 5:17 PM  

Impressive .

Prash 6:56 PM  

You were talking about butterfly right ????

I have doubts!!!!

Who is that ?....come on !!!

*wink*
*smile*

Anand 7:37 PM  

oops!
That was a touch and go!
Hope ur ok!?

starry nights 7:38 PM  

VJ..welcome to my blog and please stop by again ,thanks.

Keshi 7:39 PM  

Only a butterfly? awww :)

keshi.

starry nights 7:39 PM  

Prash..thanks.What do you think I was talking about? Butterfly

starry nights 7:40 PM  

Anand..thanks. I am OK.

starry nights 7:40 PM  

Keshi..thank you.Yes a butterfly.

Ekta 7:40 PM  

awwww!
*I am left alone
Waiting and hoping.*

I hope u dont have to wait too long!

Kuan Gung 8:37 PM  

Very nice starry...great images...thank you

starry nights 8:43 PM  

Ekta..I hope not too long.

passerby55 8:50 PM  

lalitha...

...eh BUtterfly...

you elude
you skip
you are not telling
the who
not within your reach!

have a GREAT weekend

Othersideblue 9:01 PM  

Keep your sky starry
Never let hope die in you
Thank u for visiting Othersideblue

Aditi 10:41 PM  

Only a butterfly yet there could be so many layers.. so many ppl could identify with it and fit it into their lives..
=) well written

Dawn....सेहर 11:23 PM  

I guess human mind is summoned with two words...wait & hope :)
Amazing poetry

Cheers

Rose 12:21 AM  

The butterflies like wishes flutter into our lives and we float in the ecstatic world of dreamz.. till it vanishes with the wind, leaving us only with the memory of how it felt to have a dream..

Nicely written..

:)

..Me

neihal 1:10 AM  

lovely....the simple lines hold so much meaning.

prithz 1:12 AM  

Ah!!! That was wonderfully crafted... hugggggzzz starry!!!

AlterinG Abhishek 1:43 AM  

Gee! this is prett interesting..
(he u have linked only one of my common blogs na.to ur blogroll)

Mr. J 2:00 AM  

Ahhaa.. short and lovely ;)

hillgrandmom 4:17 AM  
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hillgrandmom 4:19 AM  

I think I can guess where that came from!

Suji 5:20 AM  

Oh only a butterfly....and I thought.... ;)

The Brown eyed one 5:22 AM  

Well Written!!! Way to go!!:-)

Anshuman 6:18 AM  

trying to catch butterflies ... I hope they never loose their freedom (aka, never get caught) -:)

Mindinside 7:28 AM  

Very nice and expressive
To write is to unburden

christabelle 7:37 AM  

beautiful poem, very beautiful indeed!

Has to be me 7:52 AM  

Just simply lovely & v.romantic too! Hmmmm, so who waas the passer by?!!! ;)

starry nights 8:06 AM  

Passerby..thank you.have a good weekend too.

starry nights 8:07 AM  

Otherside blue..welcome to my blog and please come again.thank you for your kind words.

starry nights 8:08 AM  

Dawn..thank you.

starry nights 8:09 AM  

Aditi..so true.only a butterfly can do that.

starry nights 8:11 AM  

Rose..thank you.You explained exactly how I feel.

starry nights 8:12 AM  

Abhishek..thanks.and I am going to blogroll your other blogs too.I like your one liners.

starry nights 8:13 AM  

Neihal..welcome back after your exams.I was worried about you after the Mumbai Blasts.thanks for your kind words.

starry nights 8:14 AM  

Prithz..thank you

starry nights 8:15 AM  

Hillgrandmom..thanks.I guess you do.

starry nights 8:15 AM  

Suji..only a butterfly!

starry nights 8:16 AM  

Browneyed one ..thank you

starry nights 8:24 AM  

Anshuman..welcome and come again.thank you.

starry nights 8:24 AM  

Mindinside..thank you.

starry nights 8:25 AM  

Christabelle..thank you

starry nights 8:26 AM  

Hastobe me..only a beautiful butterfly! sad (sigh)

Masd 9:10 AM  

Simple, deep, real.



Thank you

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