Thursday, July 27, 2006
Immaculately dressed
Trying to impress.
You pass by my window
I watch you from a distance
My heart skips a beat
I wish you would come closer
You are sometimes within my reach
I stretch out my hand
want to touch
Just when I think I have you
You slip by
I am left alone
Waiting and hoping.
84 comments:
That was a great one.
A good one StarryN,charming !
preacher sees starry nights tryin to reach out to someone.
the other you?
peace..!!
\m/
Thank you Priya.
hi
liked visiting your blog.
Oh... I love this!
Beautiful!
Margie :)
good one!
Oh that was lovely!
This is a smart one aparts from having the tones of "want"...Really wonder if you are waiting to touch a butterfly or a person you have a crush on...its leading u know..:)
and the hope lives on!! :)
Archana..thanks.
Only a butterfly preacher.
Shilpi..thanks and do come back again.
Samuru..thanks.
Shankari..thanks.
Sumitha..thanks.
Scribblez...Just a beautiful butterfly passing by my window.
Neers..we are nothing without hope.
Butterflies r always tempting...
THANKS SO MUCH, Lalitha!! :)
* I am left alone,
Waiting and Hoping...
Last line sounded tragic and i am glad that you left a optimistic note on that... (Hoping)...
Take care dear!
Beautiful words, and beautiful pictures:-)
I'm impressed!!
Hey starry! How are you?
very nice one!!
Isnt it that (hoping and waiting) what makes life exciting...:)
hope the hope keeps hoping and the wait just gets over with soon :)
nice one
We all wait.. don't we?
Who be the one you are trying to reach out to? :)
Southpaw..true.butterflies come by,they tease you and flyaway.
Eclipsed thoughts..thank you.Where there is hope, there is life.
Sudharshan..thank you.very kind of you.
Contented..true.I would rather hope and wait than give up. thanks.
Natasha..thank you. sometimes I wish I was a butterfly just flying around, stopping to smell the flowers.
Maya..I hope so too.thank you
Sarah..so true we all wait.
Karmic Jay..maybe someone close to me but really far away.
that was sooo cute
itz like kiss the frog and may be he will become a prince :P
smz..thank you.
Makes me think of puppy love. The longing and the ineptness to access are so poignantly expressed.
Nie one Starry Nights...reminded me of my crush in college :)
Id it is..thank you
KK..thank you.sweet memories for you.
Impressive .
You were talking about butterfly right ????
I have doubts!!!!
Who is that ?....come on !!!
*wink*
*smile*
oops!
That was a touch and go!
Hope ur ok!?
VJ..welcome to my blog and please stop by again ,thanks.
Only a butterfly? awww :)
keshi.
Prash..thanks.What do you think I was talking about? Butterfly
Anand..thanks. I am OK.
Keshi..thank you.Yes a butterfly.
awwww!
*I am left alone
Waiting and hoping.*
I hope u dont have to wait too long!
Very nice starry...great images...thank you
Ekta..I hope not too long.
Kuang..thanks
lalitha...
...eh BUtterfly...
you elude
you skip
you are not telling
the who
not within your reach!
have a GREAT weekend
Keep your sky starry
Never let hope die in you
Thank u for visiting Othersideblue
Only a butterfly yet there could be so many layers.. so many ppl could identify with it and fit it into their lives..
=) well written
I guess human mind is summoned with two words...wait & hope :)
Amazing poetry
Cheers
The butterflies like wishes flutter into our lives and we float in the ecstatic world of dreamz.. till it vanishes with the wind, leaving us only with the memory of how it felt to have a dream..
Nicely written..
:)
..Me
lovely....the simple lines hold so much meaning.
Ah!!! That was wonderfully crafted... hugggggzzz starry!!!
Gee! this is prett interesting..
(he u have linked only one of my common blogs na.to ur blogroll)
Ahhaa.. short and lovely ;)
I think I can guess where that came from!
Oh only a butterfly....and I thought.... ;)
trying to catch butterflies ... I hope they never loose their freedom (aka, never get caught) -:)
beautiful poem, very beautiful indeed!
Just simply lovely & v.romantic too! Hmmmm, so who waas the passer by?!!! ;)
Passerby..thank you.have a good weekend too.
Otherside blue..welcome to my blog and please come again.thank you for your kind words.
Dawn..thank you.
Aditi..so true.only a butterfly can do that.
Rose..thank you.You explained exactly how I feel.
Abhishek..thanks.and I am going to blogroll your other blogs too.I like your one liners.
Neihal..welcome back after your exams.I was worried about you after the Mumbai Blasts.thanks for your kind words.
Prithz..thank you
Me..thank you
Hillgrandmom..thanks.I guess you do.
Suji..only a butterfly!
Browneyed one ..thank you
Anshuman..welcome and come again.thank you.
Mindinside..thank you.
Christabelle..thank you
Hastobe me..only a beautiful butterfly! sad (sigh)
Simple, deep, real.
Thank you
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