Monday, August 07, 2006
LOVE LOST
Has the love died
Or is it Inside
I ask myself.
I see signs of weariness
Signs of Distress
Signs of unhappiness
Signs of stress.
Words that are said
Insensitive and without thought
Wounds my soul inside and out.
Am I just the person seeing it
Am I the person feeling it.
I dont know.
Is there any love left
Has it died
Can it be re-kindled
Will I feel the same inside.
Has the love died
Or is it alive
Only time will tell
I say to myself.
78 comments:
Love never dies....its just buried under a lot of other priorities in life,scrap off the unwanted priorities and u'll see the shining love sparkling again...
Good day my friend!
so beautiful...did u write this Starry? WOWZA!
**Is there any love left
Has it died
sometimes I feel the love is lost and I wont be able to re-kindle the flame...I really do feel like that.
tnxx for this verse...somehow I had tears in my eyes as I read it.
Keshi.
Very nice! But it was appearing though you wanted to write in someother way and ended up writing this way! Anyway good one!
love doesn't die it just needs a break.it will come right back refreshed and filled.be patient lalitha.........
Love doesn't die..it just wax and wane like the moon.. some days it is all beautiful..some days it is just darkness..but always remember..the moon is there..somewhere
maybe the "love" still remains, possibly with an increased intensity; but what has died is the drive to appreciate it, cajole it and groom it.
Raj..thanks. I hope it does.
Keshi..I did.just feeling a little down.just came from my heart.Thank you
Iandian angle.dont know what but this is what my heart feels sometimes.
Thank you Preeta.I think sometimes we do need a break.
Thank you sarah.
seriously frivilous..maybe!
The picture and the words.. they are all like an illusion, starry.
Love is never lost. Do not worry.
Awesome post !
With Best Regards,
Srijith Unni.
very nice poem...I see a budding poet here..
Srijith..thanks.
Ganesh..thanks.Just penned a few lines that I was thinking.
I like how simply you potray complex emotions....the pic. too makes so much sense with the poem. Lovely.
love never dies .... it may sink a bit deeper but it is always there. it only needs a moment to spark that charm again!!!
Nice emotional poem! Havent really known what love is. But I hope time will tell you answers as you say and make you discover its new definitons...:)
Beautiful Poem!
Questioning????
I could have written something very
much the same!
Feeling a little that way too!
But, love( real love) never dies!
You need a break... run away to our beautiful mountains here in
CO.....
Take care!
Margie:)
I am literally beginning to hate love... sometimes, i feel, all my love for the person goes waste, when the other doesnt reciprocate... is so sickening....
Love lives and we share it in many different ways.Love is always a feeling of insecurity as we keep asking ourselves is it right or wrong?
u alright?
Hope things get better... good luck!
And no, love cant die
hey same pinch buddy...me too these days...for no reason have similar feelings
I believe true love never dies no matter the storm or stress it goes thru, sometimes it may burn low but its still there.
Hope ur okay, the poem sounds kind of depressing. but ur sure a good writer.
It is worth giving it a try isnt it.. to rekindle the feelings..?
guess for certain things we just have to wait for time to tell!
Nice one:) love is inside us, we have found it.
Wow that is beautiful.. you are amazing at expressing your thoughts.. which today happened to be a mirror of mine..
Good one Starry! I think u just need to light the flame again & rekindle it. :) Good luck!
Oh Starry...Very nice....U willl realise tht the love is not lost within deep qarters when you miss the person or stay away from tht person for a while...."Every body needs a little time away, I heard a say- From each other...Even lovers need a holiday, far away from the ..."
I like this poem! :)
Neihal..thank you
Ankit..THank you for your kind words.
Brown eyed one..thank you
Natasha..I hope your love is re-kindled and does not die.
Contented..thank you.
Margie..thank you.I do need to go to the mountains to meditate.
Prithz..true sometimes I feel like that but then I say to myself love is such a beautiful emotion.Love is for all time, its people who change.
Chandni..thanks for asking. Just feeling a little down, will pull through as always.
Sophie..know how you feel.hope things change.
Christabelle.thanks.I feel better today.
Rose..you are right.I have invested too much in this love to let it die.I will make it light up again.
Ekta..true. time will tell.
Jeevan..thank you
Aditi..thank you.hope u feel better.
Has to be me..thank you
Thank you scribblez for your kind words. They say distance does make the heart grow fonder.
Very nicely written Starry.
Only time will tell...
If you question, you know the answer. There can't be any doubt about love. What is is, what ain't aint.
KK..thanks.
White Magpie..welcome to my blog and do come again. True. If I did not feel the way I do then I would not have to Question it would I?
love dies. all the time.
but it dies not of its issence and madness. it dies of time. wisdom and clarity.
awesome...
as alwez...starry has left preacher speechless.
peace..!!
\m/
Autobiographical? Hang in there, this too shall pass. Tomorrow is another day.
Oops.. I hope that was not too nosy. My apoligies.
Thank you preacher.
Jay..thanks.No you are not nosy.
Some heart rending thought... beautifully penned.
Though I do believe that love can be unrequited but seldom lost or dead.
Id It is..thank you
Priya..you are so right.thank you
Love never dies. It just disappears into oblivion.
oh starry! this is the q i ask myself every moment these days. n the ans i always get is. no love never dies.. doesnt matter how much it hurts at times.. but at end of day u always find yrself murmuring love u :(
awesome just so touching... hope u'll feel better soonie
*smiles*
lalitha, what a beautiful verses..It reminds of the saying"
Our Sweetest songs are those which tells the saddest words".Truly, love can never be lost, it just needs to brought out..
Lalitha cheer up...hope your ok today..
Love is like a wave-it ebbs and flows.
It's there but sometimes it seems a little distant and out of reach,
or covered with a dust.
Dust it off-give love a little attention and it can come back more
vibrant and stronger than ever.
Blessings!
love will never die as long as we dont stop loving. There is sadness in your words, a deep melancholy and i see that the grind of daily life has got to you.
Like they say, variety is the spice of life, so try something different and see if it makes any difference. Take a break, a vacation to hawaii will defenitely help ;)
Thanks for stopping by my blog and for your comments. Take care, feel better and be happy
-ari
Mumbai guy..trueand thanks.
Sudha..thank you for your kind words.today is another day. I am fine.
Blessed..thank you.
Faith ..what you said is so true and thats the reason I am still married.
ari4u...welcome to my blog and please do come again. thank you for your kind words. I do need a break.
Love never dies....its immortal.
Have read all ur previous posts, i m sure u hv a beautifull heart or else its difficult to pen down such beautifull stuff. Loved the tribute to the working moms the most.
beautiful...did you write this? If so, I would to share it with some friends. Truly amazing. I think love or at least a part of love always stays with you forever. You never forget, and it never "dies."
It's quite the opposite,
Everything comes to life with love
Sunitha thank you and welcome to my blog and please do come again.
Robyn..yes I did write it. you can share it with whomever you want. It wa something I felt in my heart.It was just one of those days.
Othersideblue. it used to. somewhere along the way I think it died a little.
Love never dies unless you stop nuturing it. Nuture it with care and it will grow. Sometimes it seems dead, like a tree in autumn but spring is always around the corner.
Suji..thank you. you are absolutely right.
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