Thursday, May 11, 2006


THE WIND
Written by vijay

The harsh wind lunges at everything in its way,
resulting in several dust whirlwinds
coming through like a tornado.
The trash is scattered throughout,
Thoughts of lunch and games penetrate the mind.
Birds flying and thrashing through this malicious wind,
are looking for a place to hide
The evenly cut green grass stand strong,
waving similar to the American Flag seen from afar.
The wind is even stronger, thrusting mounds of dust into a battered face.
Skin shivering, goose bumps come alive as this cold but intense wind
makes its way through.
The smell of desserts, sandwiches and other worldly pleasures fill the air
One shove of this wind inputs different aromas.
I like the wind.

22 comments:

Sarah 8:06 AM  

your son wrote it well.. I could see the wind throwing the thrash around...Beautiful
Sarah

starry nights 8:12 AM  

Thank you sarah.

SCRIBBLEZ TO WAKEUP 11:11 AM  

Hey...Vijay is quiet a poet...It is so refreshing to see that they write such beautiful poems about the most simplest things!! Very nice poem!! ***pat on the back**

Sumitha 12:08 PM  

Wow ! what an interesting blog!nice poems and lots of stuff to look for...Great job!

SCRIBBLEZ TO WAKEUP 12:50 PM  

Hey..Not sure if you get your comments in your mail..If you dont, would want to let you know tht I read "as time goes by", your post n have left u a comment there...U can delete this silly message if you like..:)

starry nights 1:23 PM  

scribblez to wake up..Thanks, I am sure vijay would like your comment.

starry nights 1:24 PM  

Sumitha shibu...thanks for visiting my blogsite, do come again.

starry nights 1:53 PM  

Scribblez.. Thanks for your comment on my As time goes by blog.It was a special time and I dont think it will be repeated.sometimes these special moments come only once. By the way J stands for Joseph.

jac 4:23 PM  

Simply beautiful, both your children...or is there more ?

starry nights 7:28 PM  

Thanks Jac..only two.no more.

Mindinside 7:34 PM  

I see you are a caring mom and
your children are gifted with talent and a lovely bright mom :)

starry nights 7:39 PM  

Mindinside..Thank you

I love Munich 9:57 PM  

That is beautiful!! You have a very lovely blog ... I put it to my favourites! Come again visiting me - it's wonderful to have you over!

starry nights 10:04 PM  

I love munich..Thanks for visiting my blogsite. welcome aboard.

Kalpana,  10:42 PM  

Your son writes beautifully
I just printed all your blogs for my mom to read
She loves reading them
Kalpana

Dr O2 10:42 PM  

wind has always been hailed by mankind. It was included in the 4 holy elements which is no wonder as it's magic still haunts us.

Interesting blog SN.

Ajay 10:58 PM  

Oh Lalitha
Another robert frost in the making ;)
Beautiful poetry. and aamazing pic too. BTW try asking him to write abt the Inidan flag too :)
Hmm, did he write it for u? :)
Give him his favourite treat for writing such a good poem. :))

starry nights 8:29 AM  

Dr O2 ...Thanks for visiting my blog. The wind is a useful and a harmful element.I dont know what made him write about the wind.

starry nights 8:30 AM  

Kalpana & Ajay ... thank you. I am sure he will be thrilled that everyone liked his poem.

chet 9:30 PM  

Vijay writes beautifully. Your son described it perfectly.

Sojourner 12:18 AM  

hmm.. simple and details..
i am getting an education here.
vijay and maya and you all have that elegance...
very nice!

starry nights 6:05 PM  

thank you sojourner.

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