Friday, October 06, 2006
SUNSET
I sit by my window
Looking out beyond the hills
I watch the sunset
And am happy to be me.
I watch the brilliant blue
Turn to a soft pink and grey
Some dark clouds begin to form
At the end of the day.
I see the trees change from
Dark green to burnt orange
So many colors to herald fall.
I hear the dogs bark
I can hear the birds chirping
Feeding their young
Soon it will be dusk
Time to quiet down.
I look up at the sky
It is twilight
The stars slowly fill the sky
I look up at the full moon
It is time to say good night.
83 comments:
Well, i try to enjoy most of what you mentioned, but havent yet enjoyed all in one day.
Good writing.
Very beautiful.. even more so if u can see the hills from your home.. that would be a gorgeous sight
=)
I like your poem very much starry!
Hope you are feeling ok!
Have a great weekend!
Margie
Alex..well sometimes you can, if you sit long enough to move from twilight to dusk. thanks
Aditi..thank you. I live in a valley so am surrounded by hills. It is a gorgeous sight.
Thank you Margie.. have not been doing too well, too many diagnostic tests and dr appointments.Next month this time I would be in surgery.please pray that all goes well.
Alexis..thank you.
Wow! awesome poem Starry. Liked the way it finished a lot. Will be good to sing this to a kid to make him/her to go to bed :)
Well written! a very simple and nice poem! the unparalleled beauty of mother nature can never be explained in a few words!
Sitting from twilight to dusk would be awesome .:)
Absolutely Beautiful!!! I love your layout as well. :o)
hey thats a good one..probably thats just a moment still uve described it so well...:)
WOW
awesome template :)
and a beautiful poem. felt calm and serene :)))
I am always amazed by you. You always manage to write the most beautiful poems. I have to agree with alex in that I have not enjoyed all in one day. But it is not hard to just close my eyes and see it in front of me.
nice.. nice *smiles*
never thought about sunset so deeply....
Great poem Starry
"And am happy to be me"
beautiful starry :)
and am happy for you
for an other take on somebody's night and his mornings, pls. do visit delhidreams.
Woow...fantastic pic, and fantastic poem!!!
Enjoy your weekend!
Beautiful, Simply Beautiful!!!
I too Love to watch the Sunset and Sunrise, what a beautiful nature we have!! Sweet poem dear.
Happy Weekend:)
Excellent poem and nice pic to support.
njoy a nice week end
great day.
Lyrical almost sing-song....
Very very beautifull!!!
beautiful poem & picture!
nice poem, i love the sunset too. u have frozen those moments in a poem, i try to do it through photos. :)
a peaceful poem.
loved it.
KK.thank you.
indianangel..thanks. it ia always a nice feeling to just stop and enjoy nature.
Alex..it is awesome,you should try it sometime.
Mindinside..so true.
Jon..you have a new look.love it. thanks.my friend Yogi did this layout for me. I like it too.
Saira..thank you.
Ajay..thanks.so you like my new look.how have you been? have not seen you around lately.
Thank you Chet.
Faith..thank you.
Ganesh..thank you.
Adi..thanks. I will be there.
Sudarshan..thank you. I hope you havea good weekend too.
Sunil..thank you.
Jeevan.thank you. have a good weekend too.
Deepak..thank you.
Plus ultra..welcome to my blog and please do come again.thank you.
Southpaw..thanks.How are you buddy?
Hillgrandmom..thank you.
Madhu..thanks. and you do such a good job with your pics.I love them.
Passerby..thanks.
Lovely poem Starry !! Beautiful and just reading it felt so serene and peaceful !!
And good luck with your doc appt on Monday. Hoping and praying that things go well.
Hugs
Gauri
Thank you very much for stopping by, I'm so glad you enjoy my latest work! Thank you so much! :o)
It is so amazing how pretty a picture such simple and small words can paint in my mind. It was lovely. Good one starry. Have a nice weekend
Its such a great poem which can be related to your template starry.
Wonderful poem and I love the picture too!
Gauri..thanks.
Ari4u..thanks.
Priya..thank you.
Anali..thank you.
hows you, lalitha? am doin a salsa number for an event at work... and thinkin of also doing on my bharatnatyam pieces too! but dunno!
this poem was amazingly image inducing... i could just see it all
beautiful poem with all nice words putting across your thoughts!!!
very nice!!
;-))
Neers..thanks. WOW! I think you should do both. I love salsa dancing.I am going to learn to after my back is fixed. you are so talented.can write so well and also dance.
Deepsat..thank you.
Very nicely expressed. My sister in law stays near Juhu Beach in Bombay and I make it a point to go to the beach every evening when I am there. It is heaven. Recently, I was in chennai for the blog mela where my hosts told me that at the marina beach there was no susnset but sunrise. I was so used to the concept of sunset on the beach that it never occured that a beach could be facing east as well.
A very fresh and clear experience your words were, starry..
Do keep writing..
With Best Regards,
Srijith.
nice read!
as always... u say so much in simple and elegant words
sorry i haven't been on ur blog since a long time..
mwahhh Starry it's Monday now...so Good Morning! :)
Keshi.
hey ! i cant view nething on ur blog .. can just see a couple of red crosses
beautiful poem..its time to sleep..
have a sweet dreams dear..
true words, if only everyone stops for a moment to view the wonders of the world, then the beauty of the soul will come true too...
Great poem. I love the night sky filled with stars and the moon too. :)
I sit by my window
Looking out for a hill
this place is funny flat,
And am happy to be me.
:))
Hiren..sunset must be beautiful at the beach.
Srijith..thank you
Keshi..good morning where have you been? dancing!
Deepa..I am sorry you cannot see anything.dont know why.
Ghost particle..thank you.so true it takes but a few moments to enjoy nature.lets you forget about yourself.
Shruti..thanks.sweet dreams to you too.
Suji..me too.just loveeeeeeeeeeeeee the night sky.
BVN..need to come by my side of town.surrounded by hills.
lol I have been boogying along the highways ;-)
Keshi.
full of sensitivity that is so characteristic of you!!
hey, absolutely wonderful!
a great template too! ffrom where did u get it?
very visually appealing... :)
nice snap and very poetic :)
Very nice piece.Almost relived the experience.
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